{"id":1476,"date":"2013-12-28T12:00:51","date_gmt":"2013-12-28T17:00:51","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/?p=1476"},"modified":"2021-05-26T14:54:07","modified_gmt":"2021-05-26T18:54:07","slug":"writing-journal-13","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/?p=1476","title":{"rendered":"Writing Journal"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Entered on 23 Nov.<\/p>\n<p><em>When does Sebastian actually collapse?<\/em><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Right after the injured are taken to the hospital\n<ul>\n<li>Why wouldn&#8217;t they take him to the hospital, too, especially if Diane thinks it&#8217;s a heart attack?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>In the evening, when people start debating whether to stay or press on\n<ul>\n<li>Same as above, there&#8217;s no way in hell Diane wouldn&#8217;t take him to an available and fully functioning hospital.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>In the night, during shared dreams\n<ul>\n<li>Can&#8217;t collapse when you&#8217;re already lying down.<\/li>\n<li>Could collapse in Diane&#8217;s dream, and resist waking up in the morning.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>In the morning, during debate\n<ul>\n<li>Would influence the decision, probably.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>In the morning, during the Homeland excommunicating them\n<ul>\n<li>Would steal the spotlight, make the scene feel crowded.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>In the morning, after they leave the Homeland\n<ul>\n<li>People would wonder if it was leaving the Homeland that sapped the last of his strength.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>When the group enters Dragon City\n<ul>\n<li>Will express the immediacy of the situation.<\/li>\n<li>Possibly too similar to the old version of events.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>Decision\n<ul>\n<li>Have him get violently ill in the Homeland, the morning before everyone leaves. He will write it off as bad food, but will have a mild fever as well.<\/li>\n<li>Fever will get worse as they progress to Detroit, and he will collapse when the Caravan is being welcomed to the city by Jason.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Entered on 23 Nov. When does Sebastian actually collapse? Right after the injured are taken to the hospital Why wouldn&#8217;t they take him to the hospital, too, especially if Diane thinks it&#8217;s a heart attack? In the evening, when people &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/?p=1476\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[],"tags":[15],"class_list":["post-1476","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","tag-writery"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/paQnES-nO","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1476","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1476"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1476\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1479,"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1476\/revisions\/1479"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1476"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1476"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/davidmcrampton.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1476"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}