So, this rejection from Baen has created an opportunity.

It’s time for a re-write.

I’ve already been re-doing all the intros to the chapters. The poetry is going bye-bye, and Timothy Marley is getting a bit of an upgrade.

The dream sequences are going to be double-checked, and only re-arranged if absolutely necessary.

The invasion of California will stay. The robots in California will stay.

They just may not be giant. And they likely won’t transform.

This is a big diversion for the last 4 or so chapters of the book. Would anyone like to share their opinion? You likely won’t get this chance after I become incredibly famous. ;)