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Writing prompt #5 – You have magic soap. What does it wash away?

Lamb’s Blood

“How good to see you again, Father. And so soon.” The tall woman toweled sweat off of her brow and out of her close-cropped brown curly hair. “I’m sorry for my state, but you’ve caught me during my workout. If you’d made an appointment, I could have worn my Sunday best.”

The Priest’s frown deepened. The wrinkles covering his gaunt face followed, as if his face preferred the expression. He glanced over the warehouse, noting the makeshift living quarters, a nondescript car just inside the garage door, and a few crates, bunched together haphazardly. The rest of the building was open and unused. “I wouldn’t ask you to change on my account.”

She smiled brightly. “So rare to hear from those in your profession.” She tossed the towel over her shoulder and stretched her legs. “What brings you to my humble abode unannounced?”

The Priest heard steel in that last word, but mentally shrugged it off. This girl would never threaten him; he was the customer. “I need more soap.”

Her eyebrows shot up and the grin dropped from her face. “Holy shit.” His frown became a scowl, but she didn’t seem to notice. “You had a case. You’ve burned through it already?”

He crossed his arms. “My congregation has more than recovered its population, in fact, attendance levels are requiring us to refurbish and re-open buildings that have been closed for decades.”

She nodded, her hands on her hips. “You have a problem of unexpected demand. I gotcha. I run into that all the time. You need to up your regular order, and get a filler shipment expedited to meet the immediate demand, and prevent your consumers from finding what they need elsewhere.” She cocked her head to the side. “That sort of thing runs expensive, but you usually make it up in the long run.”

The Priest sighed heavily, and the lines in his face relaxed as far as they were able. “Excellent, yes, let’s do that. I am ready to pay for expedited shipping, so to speak.”

The windows that lined the top of the warehouse lightened as the sun rose outside. “Aw, hell, Father.” His frown returned. “I’d love to do that for you, because more profit for me, but I can’t. There’s only one manufacturer for your… product… and I was able to get half of their last batch, which I sold all to you.”

The cold metal digging into the small of his back was starting an ache. “You’re saying that you can’t get any more? There are four group baptisms scheduled for next week alone.”

The woman smirked. It was not altogether unattractive. “Wait, wait. You’ve added the soap to your baptism ritual? They think that Jesus is washing away their doubt? Oh, Father, that’s slick.” The smirk widened back into a full grin. “And probably grounds for excommunication.”

The Priest’s right hand crept to his back. “Are you threatening me?”

The smile stayed on her face, but left her eyes. “No, sir. Just stating the obvious. The reality of the situation is that I have no idea when more will be available, or if more will ever be available.”

Fear mixed with anger on his face. “I don’t think you understand, little girl. Priests across the state are ready and willing to incorporate the soap into their rituals to revitalize their congregations. As you say, they are risking excommunication for the good of the Church, and I have made promises!”

“Father, I don’t have any to sell you.”

He pulled the gun and pointed it at her, hand shaking. “Then you will take me to this manufacturer. Now!”

She heaved a dramatic sigh. “Have it your way.” There was a white blur, and his left eye exploded into pain and darkness. He dropped the gun to cover his eye as something warm flowed down his face. He heard screaming. His legs were knocked out from under him, and he fell to the cold cement floor. Pain exploded again, this time in his hip. The screaming stopped and turned into a groaning. An old man groaning in terrible pain. The woman appeared above him, holding the barrel of his gun in the towel. “You want to meet the manufacturer? Fine, you dumb old shit.” Her hand, and the gun, came down, and everything went black.

When the blackness receded, he felt like he was sliding off the edge of a cliff. One eye throbbed, and the other opened. The light was bright here, too bright to make anything out. There was an antiseptic smell, like a hospital. Two women were speaking quietly nearby. His hip ached as badly as his eye, and there was a burning pain in the side of his neck. He tried to raise his arm to wipe at his eye, or feel his neck, but it wouldn’t move. Neither would his left. Something was holding his legs down, too. Panic struck his chest and he started to struggle. His eye adjusted to the room’s light, and he saw the floor above his head and the lights below his shoes. He was strapped down to a bed or table, angled upside-down, and a red tube was hung from his table to the middle of the room, where the two women stood.

Other beds were arranged around the room, sporting clear tubes coiled on their sheets. Twelve or fifteen of them in total. Why were the other tubes clear, while his was red? Oh, God…

A familiar voice called from the center of the room. “Looks like Padre Wrinkleyface is awake!” Footsteps echoed in the room’s emptiness, and then a kind, middle-aged face appeared above him. Her black hair was shot through with gray, and she had amazing laugh lines at her eyes. He immediately relaxed.

“Father, I can’t tell you how happy I am that you wanted to visit my little facility. I have to admit, even though it’s a sin, I’m proud you get to see my new setup. The last one was just dreadful.” She checked something at his neck, and the burning intensified for a moment. “Oh, honey, don’t try and talk. You’ve been gagged for safety’s sake. And you’re such a brave shepherd. Our mutual acquaintance here has been telling me about all the good work you’ve been doing for the Church with my soap! And there are others that want to do the same!” The Priest saw her eyes gather tears, and his own started to do the same.

“Isn’t it great, Padre?” The other woman’s face pushed into view, devilishly amused. “The churches are going to get their soap after all!”

“Oh, dear, you won’t be conscious for much longer. I’m one of the faithful, Father, and what you’ve done with my soap is beyond my highest hopes. I’m going to make sure that your work continues, and that the other Priests get their supply. The blood you’re sacrificing is an essential ingredient. With as many times as Jesus has sacrificed His own blood through you, I hope that this carries personal, if not spiritual, meaning.”

The Priest’s eye slid closed, and he felt like he was floating. Her last words were so far away. “I have to prepare the other ingredients. Drop his body off at his Church; he deserves a proper burial.”

Writing Prompt

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Writing prompt #4 – In what way do you not fit in with the family you grew up with?

The Sinestral

The wiry man sat with his legs crossed on the uncomfortable chair in front of the clerk’s desk. A single sheet of paper lay in his lap atop his hat, and he couldn’t resist running his fingers along its edges. Holding real paper, made from trees, was exceptionally rare. The FPO was known for its love of both bureaucracy and tradition.

The clerk returned to her desk carrying a steaming mug of coffee, and eyed him up and down. She heaved a sigh, and sat heavily in her chair. He felt the blush fill his cheeks and warm his ears. She’d definitely recognized him.

Skipping past the usual pleasantries, she held out her hand and raised her eyebrows. “Another complaint form?”

“No, ma’am.” He handed the sheet over, sad for the paper’s loss, apprehensive for the clerk’s reaction.

Her eyes scanned it, blinked, and then scanned it again. Her right hand wandered over to a cup of pens, grabbed one, and tapped it repeatedly on the worn desk top. “This form requests deployment?”

He nodded. “Yes, ma’am.”

She set the pen and paper down, and then retrieved a file from her cabinet. She dropped it onto the desk, rattling her pens and attracting everyone’s attention. The monstrous stack of papers was over five inches thick. “You know what this is.”

“My file, ma’am.”

“Your file.” She opened it, and scanned the top sheet. “Seventeen deployments terminated early, twenty-three denied deployment requests, and more complaint and suggestion forms than any other applicant.”

He fought the compulsion to draw in the file’s dust with his finger. “Yes, ma’am.”

She flipped the file closed and glared at him. “Please tell me why the good clerks of the Family Placement Office should curse another group of breathers with one of your kind?”

The man’s posture straightened. “My kind, ma’am?”

“Yes.” She gestured to the hand that had handed her the paper. “Lefties. Southpaws. The Sinestral.”

The man stood up, and the clerk leaned back in her chair. As slight as he was, his presence suddenly filled the room. He smoothed his shirt and looked her square in the eyes. “Ma’am, I’m sure I don’t know.” With that, he turned around and left the office, followed shortly by the building.

He bathed his face in the eternal sunlight for a few moments before placing his hat on his head. If the FPO would not help him, he’d simply have to find another way.

What do you do?

“What do you do?” asked the fern of the gear.

“I spin.  In spinning, I turn others,” answered the gear.  “What do you do?”

“I drink in the sunlight from the sky and the water from the earth.  I change the light into energy and the dirt into food.  I spread over vast fields, and penetrate deep forests.  I feed some animals, and when I die, I will return nourishment to the earth for those that will come after.”  The fern stood tall, pride showing.

The gear thought as it spun.  “Sounds complicated.”

“It is miraculous!  I am a product of untold changes over untold years.  I will pass that on to those that come after, who will also change, becoming perfect for the world in which they live.”  The fern shook its leaves, thrilled with its perfection.

The gear thought again for a time.  “I came from a factory.  There are many others, exactly like me.  We spin, and in spinning, turn each other.”  It thought again as it spun.  “I perform the task for which I was designed.”

The wind blew through the fern’s leaves, tickling them.  “Hee!”

The gear spun, and in spinning, turned others.

[Carnival] Pressure Cooker

The carnie had Thunk sit down on a well-worn workshop stool. He rummaged through one of many drawers in an enormous wooden dresser. It had six columns of drawers, filled the shed from floor do ceiling, and shined with polish. “Got to make sure you’re actually alive, otherwise this won’t work.” He came back to Thunk brandishing a magnifying glass. “Let me see that shoulder.”

Thunk spun on the stool so that his left side faced the carnie. Now that he was distracted from carrying out Todd’s orders, he noticed that the man seemed familiar. He wore a black cotton hoodie sweatshirt with faded patches sewn on in random locations. His hair was brown, and just wavy enough to almost be curly. On the back of his left hand was a tattoo of eight arrows radiating from a single point. On his right was one of a gear. “Have we met before?”

The carnie squinted at Thunk’s shoulder meat through the magnifying glass. As he looked, a faint buzzing sound filled the shed. “Plenty of cellular activity. No healing or white cell freak-out. As if the arm was still attached. Which is clearly not the case.” The man blinked a few times and looked up at Thunk. “Did you say something?”

Thunk shook his head. “Never mind.”

The man went back to the monstrous wooden dresser and replaced the magnifying glass He closed the drawer and started digging in a pile of wooden boxes underneath a workbench. “Time is funny, Thunk. I mean, you should know that, of all people.” He pulled a long box out from the pile and blew off a layer of dust. The top of the box was ornately burned with a very simple label: Arm, Left. “It’s all stretchy.”

“How do you know my name?” The buzzing in the shed was getting louder, and Thunk really wanted to be outside, looking for Sheila.

“Fame’s funny, too.” The carnie opened the box, and Thunk heard something whispering against the red felt lining. “Two people, like us, we’ve probably run into each other dozens of times, and didn’t even know it.” He hefted the metal contraption in the box, and brought it over to Thunk.

He looked from the mess of gears and pistons and dials to the carnie and to the shed’s door. “I really should be out there, looking for Shei-”

The carnie pushed one end up against Thunk’s shoulder meat, and twisted. Thunk’s body spasmed and his eyes rolled back into his head. The gears started to turn and the pistons began to pump. “Oh, yeah. I should tell you: this is gonna feel pretty strange.”

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Thunk opened his eyes onto a frozen wasteland. Dunes of snow gave way to cracked ice and gray skies. The wind blew, and he could feel it lash at his exposed skin. He looked down at himself, only mildly shocked that he was nude. His left arm was still missing. His right wrist, both ankles, and neck were locked in steel shackles that had no chains. Thunk looked around, seriously doubting that he’d find Sheila here. He tried to step forward, only to find the ankle shackle holding him in place. He was trapped.

The ice under him began to rumble and shake. Thunk knelt on the ice, shielding his face with his arm. The cold below him shot into his knees, making him shiver and convulse immediately. In front of him, chunks of ice exploded into the air amidst billowing clouds of steam. Fear crept into the edges of Thunk’s mind, something that should not have been possible. Steam rolled over him, driving away the cold and encasing him in a layer of warm wetness. He stood again, the pale echo of fear turning into a pale echo of curiosity. He squinted into the steam ahead of him. He made out the female figure within just as he heard her take a step toward him.

She was as nude as he. Her skin was the color of brass, her eyes molten steel. She did not smile, she did not speak. She stepped forward, radiating heat, encasing them both in clouds of steam. Curiosity became wanting and lust, and they consumed him. He tried to reach out, to step toward her, but was held fast by his shackles. They chafed and cut his skin, sending droplets of blood to the ice that was somewhere below him. She stepped forward again, looking him over from top to bottom. Thunk’s desire burned his blood as she became easier to see. She was completely hairless, and the rivulets of water condensing and cascading down her lithe form made her skin shine as if it were actual brass.

Thunk raged against the shackles, straining to be free, until she placed the tips of her fingers on his chest. Pleasure danced on his skin like lightning. He shuddered with the sensation, letting it consume him. She stepped forward again, ans rested both of her hands on his hips. He shuddered again in pleasure, sagging against his shackles. She looked him in the eyes, and a voice sang in his mind.

“Do you want me?”

Thunk cried out into the endless steam. Yes, he wanted her with everything he had left. Her lips curled into a small smile, and she pressed her body against his. He moaned as she writhed and squirmed against him until it felt like she was burrowing inside of his skin.

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Thunk’s eyes snapped open. The buzzing sound was gone, replaced with clicking, clacking, hissing, and whirring from his left.

“Success!” The carnie looked gleeful. “It works!”

Thunk jumped off of the stool and was headed to the door when he noticed that the noises were coming with him. He looked down at his left arm, made of spinning gears, creaking joints, and hissing pistons. His fingers clacked as he flexed them. There was some sort of release valve near where it was mounted on his shoulder. “How… how does it work, Mr. Weaver?” He couldn’t tear his gaze from it.

“Are you familiar with the strong force that holds subatomic particles together in the shape of atoms?” Weaver was obviously pleased with himself.

“Yeah. Todd talks about science a lot.”

Weaver’s face fell, and he stammered out, “Steam. It runs on Steam.”

[Excerpt] Adam’s Name

Adam contemplates tripping over a girl who wasn’t there…

Of all of his foggy memories, running into and tripping over Susan was the most clear. It was like he’d been completely sober for just a couple of seconds, and then the drunk had come back. She had been thinking about her friend, and about some kind of life-changing decision. He remembered her dark brown eyes, as clearly as if he were looking at them. The more he thought about it, the more he realized that these details were all that he remembered. He had no idea what her hair was like, her skin, her clothes, or anything about this friend of hers.

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[Excerpt] Adam’s Name

Most of us have seen someone out of the corner of our eye that’s not really there. Not many of us have been knocked on our butt by said shadowy being.


Seth shrugged and slipped the notebook into a pocket of his hooded sweatshirt. “Ready?” Susan nodded and left the tip on the table. He cast one last glance at the clubbers that had started the whole conversation, and then they were out the door and into the brisk Autumn air. You could feel the heat and the smells radiate off of you into the breeze, and it was one of the reasons that Seth stayed in Michigan. Nothing like a good Autumn.

He was startled out of his enjoyment as Susan fell bodily into him, nearly knocking him over. He caught the brick wall of the Coney with one hand, and Susan with the other. Pain sliced into his palm, and he tumbled to the sidewalk with her.

She was up again in an instant. “Hey, fucker! Why don’t you watch… where…” She turned around slowly, searching the empty sidewalks. “Where did he go?”

“Who?” Seth used his left hand to pull himself up by the brick wall. His right palm was scraped, bleeding, and full of sidewalk grime. Great. He had iodine and bandages back at his place, but this was going to hurt for a while.

“The guy that ran into me! He was drunk; I could smell it on his breath.” She had that same look in her eyes, as if she was waking up from a dream. “He had the strangest eyes. Brown with little flecks of green in them.”

Seth felt a chill in his bones again, and thought that maybe they really had jumped off of some kind of cliff. “You saw his eyes that close when he knocked you down?” He limped over to her, and started them walking to her building.

“No. I didn’t even get a look at them. You know what else? I know what his name is. It’s Adam.”

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[Excerpt] Adam’s Name

Have you ever wondered what a contrived hurry-up-and-let’s-get-this-started plot shift feels like to characters? I have. Click below to watch Seth and Susan go through it.

Maybe a little of both. Most likely I’m leaning towards suggesting you actually do it. I don’t feel like I’m signing your death certificate doing it. That, alone, means you should do it.

Seth reached for his coffee; his mouth was very dry. She was seriously suggesting that he start this. She knew better than anyone, and thought that he could pull it off. Something snapped inside of Seth, and all around him. The impossible felt possible, the unlikely felt likely. He felt dizzy, and clutched the edge of the table for support. In a panic, he looked across the table at Susan, and met her wild eyes. It only lasted a moment, and then Seth felt completely normal. He saw his arm and hand move to lift the pen, and then he began writing.

Huh. Well, I know when I should gather opinions and information. There are obviously the leftovers of past organized crime still here. I mean, we see it every day when we come in here. That means that there’s an established territory system. To do this right, we’d have to start in a place largely ignored by those in power, otherwise we’d be squashed before we could hold our own. How would you go about finding free territory?

Seth closed the book and slid it to the middle of the table. They both just stared at it for a moment. Susan reached for it, opened it, and began to read. What he had just written made him sound like he was excited to get this going. It made him sound like he had been utterly convinced by Susan’s calling him out about fear. That wasn’t right, was it? That couldn’t be the reality of the situation. He glanced quickly at the waiter and the clubbers. They seemed normal. Everyone in the diner looked normal. Maybe he was freaking out about nothing. Maybe he really was curious about what this would be like. Susan slid the book back over to him. She looked as if she was waking up from a dream.

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[Excerpt] Adam’s Name

Oh, man, when this block broke, it was like a shattering dam. The words are just flowing, and it feels DAMN good. (That was a pun! Hee!)

The game/discussion between Seth and Susan has taken a strange turn. Seth isn’t sure if she’s playing head games with him, or really trying to get him to start an organized crime ring. And because I did so well at getting a ton out on paper, you guys get an extra-long excerpt! :)

Why not? Your honesty throws everyone, and makes them love you.

Seth sighed deeply and leaned back in the booth, making the vinyl creak. She was pulling out all of her trump cards for this round. HIs fanatical devotion to honesty had been what had earned him such a strange group of friends, and nearly every one of them would put themselves in harm’s way for him.

Love me as a Caesar would be loved, eh? I’m not denying the possibility. There have always been similar situations that have formed around me. The only reason that it would be crime that we got into is because the thugs would get the thrill from breaking rules. I wouldn’t survive because of the love, though. Either I wouldn’t return it, or someone else would want it.

Seth took a gulp of his terrible, cold coffee. He was sure that he didn’t have the temperament to lead anything like an organized crime ring. Gangs were too vicious and tribal, and ethnic mobs followed familial lines. What they were talking about was artificially creating those ties, with a goal in mind from the beginning. That was deception on a massive scale.

Or someone would return it. You would be brought down by someone else, the Boss always is, but Sol would be there to watch your back. Even while John was calling you stupid to your face. And your anger, and the power, would make you scary. The first time you got truly angry at someone and laid them out, your position would be solidified.

Seth smiled. He was sure that she was just playing the game, now. He was one of the least violent, least angry people that he knew of. Sure, he’d get frustrated every once in a while, but hitting people?

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