For serious?

You remember that Glass Crown thing? That sequel to my first novel? Chapter 9 is finished. Did I tell you?

So is Chapter 10.

I have been worried about dropping back into the “I’ll write later” mode that comes when I pick the Glass Crown back up. Instead, as Nikki puts it, I’ve developed a good pace. I am setting aside regular time in which to write, and I am actually putting words down in that time.

And it’s gotten me two chapters closer to a finished draft.

There are a couple of excerpts that I wouldn’t mind sharing. Is that something that you would be interested in seeing here?

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The Collector Gene

A few nights back, I filled another journal with words. This usually takes anywhere from ten months to two years, depending on the size of the journal and how often I’m writing. They went much faster back when I was writing The Remembrance, but slowed down once I began The Glass Crown.

This one took six months to fill, and is the second one to bite the dust since I picked the Adam’s Name story back up. It was a gift from a friend, back when I was writing the first book. He was bummed, if I remember correctly, because I hadn’t gotten to any of the notebooks he’d given me by the time I finished. I assured him that I had plenty more stories that needed out of my head and onto the page. I wasn’t done, not by a long shot.

As time goes on, my desire to collect things is shifting from Transformers and comic books to unique notebooks and journals. The one that I filled last had pages made out of recycled cotton instead of paper. It had a suede cover and a celtic knot button to wrap the closure cord around. I picked it up from a shop at the Holly, MI Renaissance Fair called Under the Mango Tree. I’ve also got two books, gifted to me by my brother if I remember correctly, that are made out of the fibers of elephant dung. (Oh, wow, those guys are making them with lines on the pages now!) A while back, I was gifted one made entirely out of bamboo, from cover and spine to the pages.

When I’m in second hand stores, I have to restrain myself from picking up the ones with yellowed or wavy pages. Or when a favorite webcomic offers branded notebooks. Or when I go to a Ren Fair.

Yeah, I’m in trouble. :) Well, enough blathering. It’s time to fill the next one!

Writing Journal

From my writing journal on 16 July:

There’s no reason that a sword from a dream needs to stay a sword when it’s pulled into the real world. So, Chuck is led to a mirror by the little girl. He sees his dream self in his reflection. The dream self mirrors his actions precisely. He makes the dream self take off the sword and hand it to him through the mirror. When the sword enters the “real” world, it becomes a wooden cane with a brass dragon’s head for a handle. When Chuck finds his magic, as Michael did, he’ll turn it back into a sword.

This ended up being a point at which the two sets of conflicting characters glance off of each other, at varying rates of speed. I talked the above idea over with Nikki, and she said, “That’s exactly what I expected you to do.” This perturbed me for a reason that I couldn’t quite nail down, so I spun it again. Chuck is presented with the same option, but reacts in a way that is unexpected by those trying to manipulate him. And then the repercussions of their attempts ripple across the larger scene at a nice clip, providing a very nice buildup to something that I have outlined for Chapter 10.

Now that I’ve got that knot untangled, I’m getting words on paper again. I got some time out of the house yesterday, and made quite a bit of progress. As soon as I type it all up, I’ll update the word count so you all are kept in the loop, so to speak. :)

As I wait for more feedback from my alpha readers (hint, hint), I’ve gotten some good ideas about how to go about the novella rewrite from feedback that I’ve gotten already. Implementing some of them will really serve to tighten the focus of the story, and get you caring about the characters more quickly. That’s the plan, anyway.

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Final Stages

I have a choice to make about the first Adam’s Name novella.

I can either go the traditional publishing route with it, or I can self-publish again.

If I think that the work is good enough, once the edits and rewrite are done, I have the option to  begin navigating the slush piles of the markets publish novellas. If I think that the work is not quite good enough, but as another step in my journey toward professionally publishable, I can self-publish, as I have in the past.  If I get a bee in my bonnet about the traditional publishing industry vs. building my audience through non-traditional publishing, I have the option of creating another project or two with Lulu (trade paperback, ebook). If I go that route, there are some things to consider:

Cover artist – I’ll need a cover. Unlike past books, I have a more specific idea of what I want on the cover, and what style of art I’d want used.  This would require a commission, most likely. I’d love to support an artist in this way, that’s for sure.

Professional editor – No matter which route I go, I’d want the piece to be professionally edited.  I could contract out for this, which might be a wee bit expensive, but I think it would be more than worth it. There’s also the option of my wife, who has two associate degrees, one in literature and one in writing. She is looking to be an editor professionally, and this might be a good feather in her cap.

Why do I keep putting things in hats?

If I self-publish, I’m going to need some cash, at least for the cover art. Kickstarter might be a good place to go to raise some funds, with copies of the novella, possibly also a chapbook, as rewards. I’d need to see if there are any details, tax wise, about how I need to represent myself (person or LLC or something) to make sure that I don’t end up losing the money that should be going toward the Kickstarter purpose.

Definitely needs some thought.

Writing Journal

From my writing journal on 7 July:

What should Chuck use as a cane? It should be multipurpose, but able to function well and reliably as a cane. A larger rifle or shotgun wouldn’t do it. It could be a regular cane or crutch, if they stumbled upon the ruins of a hospital. Will need to research the locations of hospitals in Gary.


Other options? A branch. That could be turned against him by the Left Hand.

Nikki suggests that I use a dream to let us know that the item is important, and have him pull it out of the dream or stumble upon it in a trance state. As Nikki’s ideas tend to do, it got me thinking. I already have Chuck dreaming about something that might work – his father’s sword from his dress uniform. He’s instinctively reached for it several times. But I’m pretty sure it would make a terrible cane. I need to let this one percolate a bit.

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Two Magic Words

I have completed a full first draft of Adam’s Name.

This deserves a superhero pose, complete with cheesy schmuck grin. I’m doing it right now, you just can’t see it. It’s GLORIOUS.

It took three or four attempts over a span of about six years, but it’s done.  I did it.  For the fourth time, I got to write THE END.  Glee, I tell you, glee!

Adam’s Name will become the moniker of a series of what will probably all be novellas. So, the book itself needs a new title.  I’ve had a suggestion to name it after the main character, which I’m seriously considering. The first chapter or so has already been written for the second book, which means that it’s time to outline.

Of course, I can’t move forward on that just yet. I’ve got a full blown novel that I’ve been neglecting like it’s sanity in politics. The Glass Crown has seen new words for the first time in over a year. I’m hoping and praying that I can keep this momentum going strong, because a fifth iteration of those two magic words would make me even happier.

Liebster Blog Award

I’ve been bestowed the honor of the Liebster Blog Award by the monster wrangler Kaye Draper! She chronicles her writing trials and tribulations over at Write Me. Give it a peek, I don’t think you’ll be disappointed.

In turn, I am to grant this award to five more blogs.  Well, here you go:

  • Dandelionlady – An artist whose posts inspire me to keep working on my own art.
  • Off the top of my head… – A tumblr that punches me in my geek and then follows up with a kick of surreal.
  • Serenity Acres Now – A farm started by no-nonsense geeks that truly embrace the Browncoat ideal.
  • Suddenly Sara – The journal of a transgendered woman living in a cisgendered world.  I never knew how much I didn’t know.
  • Raise the Horns – Informative blog about Paganism, as long as you ignore the football references. (Not sure if this breaks the readership rule.)

The ‘rules’ of the award are the following:

  1. Thank your Liebster Blog Award presenter on your blog.
  2. Link back to the blogger who presented the award to you.
  3. Copy and paste the blog award on your blog.
  4. Present the Liebster Blog Award to 5 blogs of 200 followers or less.
  5. Let them know they have been chosen by leaving a comment at their blog.

Writery Updates

I am a few sentences away from completing the climax – the showdown – of Adam’s Name in Detroit. I have some that I want to add on the end, to tie up loose ends, and some at the beginning, to create more loose ends. The structure of the piece seems to call for both bits of extra, so I’m going to see where it leads me. I am incredibly excited to be completing this piece, and it’s going to be a hard wait for input from my Alpha Readers (who rock) and then it’ll be hard to not rush through the subsequent rewrite. First thing’s first – I need to focus and get this draft done. I need to not get distracted just as I’m nearing the finish line.

Last night, I got to see John Scalzi here in Lansing, at Schuler’s Books. He’s on tour for Redshirts, which I’m hoping to get as an eBook. Not only do the author and subject matter make me drool over the book, but Tor‘s switching to a DRM-free distribution model, and Redshirts is the first released. I’d really like to support that. Anywho, I showed up an hour after the event started, and my wife (who, as is noted in earlier posts, is awesome) took the kids to browse around the bookstore while I listened to the end of the talk, and got in line to get my copy of Old Man’s War signed. I was nervous about getting that one in particular signed, because I’d bought it used (at John King in Detroit), which means the author didn’t get any money from my purchase. My good friend reminded me that I was being silly, and to not worry about it. So, I went, and I ran into other people I knew, as I usually do. Despite my wife’s accusation of flirting (I am SO not protesting too much!), catching up was pleasant and helped pass the time in line.

I expected more people there, honestly, but I was happy that I didn’t have to fight too big of a crowd or wait too long in line. I was surprised and amused that despite explicit instructions not to bring any, there was a container of frosting (with sprinkles!) on his table as he signed away. When I got to the table, I got to thank him for his movie columns in the past, and for bringing rationality to some movies that had just generally made me pissy. I made my save vs. fanboy, which means I didn’t drool or stammer, didn’t bring up bacon taped to a cat, and was able to hold an intelligent conversation. I’m making a note here, great success!

And according to what he wrote, he remembered me from some point in the past. Of course, the last time I had him sign something, he wrote that I should “never mention bacon again.  No, seriously.” Great success, indeed.